Two versions of the opening
splash panel and the following few panels
Barks opened with a splash panel
showing Duckburg as seen from a cemetery as a
witch flies over the town on her broom. The panel
was taken directly from the same opening scene in
the film, but the editor objected as she said
that in a comic book the children would have time
to dwell on the cemetery scene and that would not
be wholesome. Barks then drew another splash
panel but in later reprints the original version
was often chosen.
The story, as it was first published,
has a splash panel on which the nephews are
painting the story title on a window. It is
followed by a 7-panel scene in which they try to
steal candy out of Donald's kitchen, but they get
rudely interrupted. When the nephews warn Donald
about witches, he self-confidently replies that
there are no such thing. This comment is followed
by an introduction of Hazel the witch. Originally,
the story did not begin with the sequence of
Donald and the nephews.
Barks had meticulously followed the
model sheets from the film when drawing the first
panels, where we follow Hazel on her broom flying
around a church tower while scaring a bunch of
bats, but he knew very well in beforehand that
the whole scene was not optimal for presentation
in a comic book.
He recalled a chance meeting he had during his
days in the Disney Studios: You could draw
just so much violent action in a comic book
before it began to get tiresome. I think Floyd
Gottfredson (the Carl Barks of the mouse
universe - Editor's remark) put his finger on
it one time when I was talking to him, sometime
in the 1940s. I'd gone to the studio for
something. He said, 'In the strip, the reader can
hold it up, and he looks at it for a long, long
time, but when it's on the screen, he sees it for
a 24th of a second, and it's gone. There's no
chance for him to look at it too long'. I
remembered what he had told me, and I toned down
my action a little bit after having talked with
him.
Barks was probably glad that Cobb agreed
with the sentiment, although it did cost him 1½
pages of redrawing...
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